Fire Light is now free on Kindle Unlimited In the past, I offered a free copy to those who were willing to leave a review. Amazon no longer allows trading books for reviews. Also, I can no longer provide more than 10% of the book due to Kindle Unlimited’s restrictions. Please purchase my books on […]

You have probably heard often that you need to avoid passive voice and replace it with active voice. Why? Don’t think of them as passive voice vs active voice sentences. Think of them more as: Exciting vs Boring sentences. Passive voice sentences are *usually* boring sentences. Not always, but it is pretty rare when they […]

This holds any editing issues found in Breaking Glass. Version 1.0 errors Chapter 5 Shotgun incorrectly called a rifle twice. Chapter 20 Alexis had to lock up the breaks to exit the freeway Alexis had to lock up the brakes to exit the freeway