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I couple days ago, I discussed Painting with Dialogue, which involved changing text where you are telling to text where you are showing using dialog. However, what if the text that you need to change is already dialog. How do you paint the dialog itself? Consider two people conversing. When they talk, do they hold perfectly still? […]

Hello fans, Torched Heart, Trinity of Mind Book 3 has posted for preorder on Amazon: https://amzn.to/3rJ8T41 with a release date of February 18, 2022. Jake, Kendra, and Alexis return for a thrilling read. Breaking Glass, ToM Book 2, ended with their need to rescue Jody. Book 3 jumps staright to the rescue mission. Ariel—a half-ancient […]

You’ve probably heard that you are not supposed to tell about emotion, but that you are supposed to show emotion. If your writing contains a line like the following, it is telling emotion, not showing emotion. “I was so surprised.” The above sentence is obviously telling. This sentence stands out because it is passive voice […]