Breaking Glass Errata

This holds any editing issues found in Breaking Glass.

Version 1.0 errors

Chapter 5

Shotgun incorrectly called a rifle twice.

Chapter 20

Alexis had to lock up the breaks to exit the freeway
Alexis had to lock up the brakes to exit the freeway

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