This holds any editing issues found in Breaking Glass.
Version 1.0 errors
Chapter 5
Shotgun incorrectly called a rifle twice.
Chapter 20
Alexis had to lock up the breaks to exit the freeway
Alexis had to lock up the brakes to exit the freeway
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