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A Poem from the Trinity of Mind Series. In broken pain, she kneels amidst gas flames. Versus fire, her leather body armor fails. It burns, it chars, it peels, as ash, it falls, sliced and stripped by colorful, cutting blades. Alone she kneels in skin as bare as birth, Baptized by fire intended to stop […]

You’ve probably heard that you are not supposed to tell about emotion, but that you are supposed to show emotion. If your writing contains a line like the following, it is telling emotion, not showing emotion. “I was so surprised.” The above sentence is obviously telling. This sentence stands out because it is passive voice […]

I wrote Fire Light in first person. Honestly, in my first draft, I never described my main character. My awesome editor, Sarah Bylund, pointed this out to me. Describing your character is not required. In Jane Austen’s Persuasion, the main character, Anne Elliot is never described. However, I felt like my character Jake needed to […]