Torment of My Loss

The birth of night exuded from my womb
My distance from the truth increased to fast
The darkness fell and could not be removed
Away from light we shift as moments pass

To fall in brittle blackness for all time
Unable to escape or rise above
The slain chance of her becoming mine
To push away my only chance at love

And suffer empty moments earned by her
Undone! My strength my will is lost this night
The cause unknown; the reason but a blur
I fought; I won; the darkness left my sight

Yet still somehow she left; she went away
The torment of my loss shall e’er remain


J. Abram Barneck.
Copyright © 2003 by Rhyous, Inc.  All rights reserved.
Revised: 13 Nov 2003 15:01:22 -0700.

Leave a Reply

Related Post

Nature’s War

Erosion empowered by crowded drops of rain A flowing energy attacking a dam of sand A force overwhelming it just cannot contain Without assistance from God’s unprovided hand Like castle walls that fall by trebuchet allowing a swarm of pike-man to rush inside In an explosion of nature the dam gives way Leaving a hole […]

But Morning Comes

Alone in darkness weakened by the night A pit I dig to trap my foolish self. Success! I’m trapped and hidden from the light, From eyes that dwell above earths solid shelf. As stone I sit immobile, empty, bleak; Not dead yet frozen by inertia’s power I should escape but will is broken, weak. I […]

Premature Love

The first of questions enters into soul Yet confidence breads hope and brakes the doubt An empty chasm, cannot yet be full Unsure what truth this day has brought about The power of beauty’s smile can cloud the mind Impress a mix of strong conflicting thoughts Like murky pond, it only clears with time Allowing […]